Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Charlie's Ramblings (21) Songs I'm loving.. and.. your leaving?

I'm loving my new Crit partner.  She's awesome and a bloody good writer!  I've read one of her stories and it had me almost in tears.  That's what makes a good writer.  The emotions writing evokes shows that a writer can play with your feelings without you realising it.

Here are a few music videos of songs I'm loving right now.  I won't say why these songs mean something to me but you've got to admit they are awesome, right?!

... And lastly.. 

So you're leaving,
Well grab your shit, pack your bags and go,
I'll be right, here, I don't need you,
Be fine here on my own.

Don't think you can test me with your bluffing skills,
If that's what this is.
'Cos I won't take to that,
You won't get me biting.

'Cos I've been hurting a long time before this.
Been prepped, exactly for this.
So you're leaving,
Pack your bags and just go.

This little bit I wrote kind of comes out harsher than I intended.  It wasn't meant to be so blunt, and so um.. much.  I guess I put a little too much feeling in my writing than I intended. But at the same time, I can't be so happy go lucky in life if I didn't have somewhere to vent those bottled up feelings.  
If you go, I'll miss you.. but I won't ever tell you how much.

That's all from me.

1 comment:

  1. What a lovely poem. Straight to the point. I want to sing "I will survive". x


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